Superhero tag line and wording in ad

Did you know that the leading cause of death of men aged 20 to 40 is depression- resulting in suicide, diabetes, respiratory failure, heart disease and eating disorders. Subsequently, none of the health problems above have any external symptoms, thus resulting in an underlying health crisis for men aged 20-40. It's well known that most of our men suffer from a heightened inferiority complex. Like every superhero, they are least likely to admit to you when something is wrong. Consequently, causing the manifestation of an underlying illness that could have been prevented if only they had visited their doctor. Now it's up to us girls!! "Save your superhero before he becomes your damsel in distress."